a six pass erasure poem
Ha! Fantastic!
Glad you liked it - it was great source material
Love the line
“eat the evenings”
I really like these kind of chains-of-poems from each other. It's a very nice way to say I heard you and this is what I feel in response.
Exactly that.
You posted something recently I'd like to alchemize into "I heard you and this is what I feel in response" - do you want to see it first, or be surprised?
Surprises are fun! :)
Love this one, Janie! So evocative of Grimm's Fairy Tales. Never trust an elf.
Ha! Fantastic!
Glad you liked it - it was great source material
Love the line
“eat the evenings”
I really like these kind of chains-of-poems from each other. It's a very nice way to say I heard you and this is what I feel in response.
Exactly that.
You posted something recently I'd like to alchemize into "I heard you and this is what I feel in response" - do you want to see it first, or be surprised?
Surprises are fun! :)
Love this one, Janie! So evocative of Grimm's Fairy Tales. Never trust an elf.